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The Transformers Rewrite Series

The Transformers Rewrite Series

The Transformers Rewrite Series
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Rewriting The Transformers

Rewriting The Transformers

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Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 1

Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 1

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Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 2

Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 2

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Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 3

Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 3

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Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 3
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Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 3

Welcome to Part 3 of 3 in my rewrite for “Transformers: Dark of the Moon”. Enjoy! Official Film Concept Artwork: Joel Change, Ryan Church, George Hull, Warren Manser, Josh Nizzi, Aaron Sims, Wesley Burt, Andy Chung, Matt Codd, Dylan Cole, Steven Messing, Steffen Reichstadt, Bruno Werneck, Richard Anderson, Max Berman, Ioan Dumitrescu, Tim Flattery, Steve Jung, Alex Kozhanov, Finnian Macmanus, Kan Muftic, Ed Natividad, James Paick, Eduardo Pena, Thomas Pringle, Furio Tedeschi, Joshua Viers, Stephen Zavala, Ben Grangereau. Starring: Benjamin Lumpkin as Optimus Prime, ØmniTheLeader as Mirage, Martinni as Ironhide, Shockwave and Sentinel Prime, GeekVioletX3 as Arcee, FortMaxIDW as Megatron, Petr Papánek as Ratchet, 1028 Pixel Productions as Soundwave. Fan Artwork: olekmiller, Saltamor, thiennh2 Music: “Transformers Classical Theme Orchestral” by Ominous Voice, “Optimus” by Steve Jablonsky, “Autobots Storm Chicago” by Steve Jablonsky, “Decepticons” by Steve Jablonsky, “The Ark” by Steve Jablonsky, “Lost Signal” by Steve Jablonsky, “New Friends, Old Enemies” by Steve Jablonsky, “Return Home” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sam Interviews” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sam at the Lake” by Steve Jablonsky, “Assault” by Steve Jablonsky, “Decepticons Attack, Autobots Return” by Steve Jablonsky, “Driller Attack” by Steve Jablonsky, “Eliminate Loose Ends” by Steve Jablonsky, “I’m Just Trying to Help Out” by Steve Jablonsky, “Ironhide to the Rescue” by Steve Jablonsky, “It Just Makes You Human” by Steve Jablonsky, “Kill the Prisoners” by Steve Jablonsky, “Never Lose Faith in Yourself” by Steve Jablonsky, “Saving Carly” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sentinel Revived” by Steve Jablonsky, “The Survival of Our Race” by Steve Jablonsky, “Xanthium Launch” by Steve Jablonsky. If you see a piece of artwork that belongs to somebody who is not listed in the credits above, please let me know so that I can give credit where credit is due. Thank you! 0:00 – 0:48 Intro 0:48 – 24:57 Act 3 24:57 – 38:06 The Climax 38:06 – 40:04 The Resolution 40:04 – 43:55 The Epilogue 43:55 – 46:21 Outro Link to Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kES3IVBTIw4&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=8&t=209s Link to Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SxvUffiAvwI&lc=UgwmOtviD5OCOTW7qWp4AaABAg Link to Behind-the-Scenes Q&A Post: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxSFna12p5AeHCYuAmLt7wU4RS1YcdRCql
Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 2
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Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 2

Welcome to Part 2 of 3 in my rewrite for “Transformers: Dark of the Moon”. I apologize for this one taking so long to be uploaded. With my new teaching and coaching positions, I don't really have time to write or edit videos and this one took me 4 months to edit. Thank you to everyone who was patient and I hope you enjoy the video! Official Film Concept Artwork: Joel Change, Ryan Church, George Hull, Warren Manser, Josh Nizzi, Aaron Sims, Wesley Burt, Andy Chung, Matt Codd, Dylan Cole, Steven Messing, Steffen Reichstadt, Bruno Werneck, Richard Anderson, Max Berman, Ioan Dumitrescu, Tim Flattery, Steve Jung, Alex Kozhanov, Finnian Macmanus, Kan Muftic, Ed Natividad, James Paick, Eduardo Pena, Thomas Pringle, Furio Tedeschi, Joshua Viers, Stephen Zavala, Ben Grangereau. Fan Artwork: olekmiller, Saltamor Music: “Transformers Classical Theme Orchestral” by Ominous Voice, “Optimus” by Steve Jablonsky, “Autobots Storm Chicago” by Steve Jablonsky, “Decepticons” by Steve Jablonsky, “The Ark” by Steve Jablonsky, “Lost Signal” by Steve Jablonsky, “New Friends, Old Enemies” by Steve Jablonsky, “Return Home” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sam Interviews” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sam at the Lake” by Steve Jablonsky, “Assault” by Steve Jablonsky, “Decepticons Attack, Autobots Return” by Steve Jablonsky, “Driller Attack” by Steve Jablonsky, “Eliminate Loose Ends” by Steve Jablonsky, “I’m Just Trying to Help Out” by Steve Jablonsky, “Ironhide to the Rescue” by Steve Jablonsky, “It Just Makes You Human” by Steve Jablonsky, “Kill the Prisoners” by Steve Jablonsky, “Never Lose Faith in Yourself” by Steve Jablonsky, “Saving Carly” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sentinel Revived” by Steve Jablonsky, “The Survival of Our Race” by Steve Jablonsky, “Xanthium Launch” by Steve Jablonsky. If you see a piece of artwork that belongs to somebody who is not listed in the credits above, please let me know so that I can give credit where credit is due. Thank you! 0:00 – 2:37 Intro & Recap 2:37 – 18:56 Act 2A 18:56 – 24:22 The Midpoint 24:22 – 36:18 Act 2B 36:18 – 36:35 Outro Link to Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kES3IVBTIw4&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=8&t=209s
Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 1
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Rewriting Transformers 3 Part 1

Welcome to my long-awaited rewrite for Michael Bay’s 2011 film “Transformers: Dark of the Moon”! This has been my most requested video for two years now so I hope you guys enjoy what I came up with! Official Film Concept Artwork: Joel Change, Ryan Church, George Hull, Warren Manser, Josh Nizzi, Aaron Sims, Wesley Burt, Andy Chung, Matt Codd, Dylan Cole, Steven Messing, Steffen Reichstadt, Bruno Werneck, Richard Anderson, Max Berman, Ioan Dumitrescu, Tim Flattery, Steve Jung, Alex Kozhanov, Finnian Macmanus, Kan Muftic, Ed Natividad, James Paick, Eduardo Pena, Thomas Pringle, Furio Tedeschi, Joshua Viers, Stephen Zavala, Ben Grangereau. Fan Artwork: olekmiller, Saltamor Music: “Autobot Fanfare” by Ford Kinder and Anne Bryant, “End Credits” by Ford Kinder and Anne Bryant, "Transformers Classic Theme Orchestral" by Ominous Voice, “The Touch” by Stan Bush, “Arrival to Earth” by Steve Jablonsky, “Dark of the Moon” by Steve Jablonsky, “Lost Signal” by Steve Jablonsky, “Freeway Chase” by Steve Jablonsky, “Return Home” by Steve Jablonsky, “New Friends, Old Foes” by Steve Jablonsky, “The Ark” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sam at the Lake” by Steve Jablonsky, “Autobots Storm Chicago” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sam Interviews” by Steve Jablonsky, “Decepticons” by Steve Jablonsky, “Sentinel Revived” by Steve Jablonsky, “Starscream Loses His Head” by Steve Jablonsky, “Revenge” by Steve Jablonsky, “Tracking the Pillars” by Steve Jablonsky, “I’m Just Trying to Help Out” by Steve Jablonsky, “Decepticons Attack, Autobots Return” by Steve Jablonsky, “Chernobyl” by Steve Jablonsky. If you see a piece of artwork that belongs to somebody who is not listed in the credits above, please let me know so that I can give credit where credit is due. Thank you! 0:00 – 3:27 Intro 3:27 – 6:02 Recap 6:02 – 25:38 Act 1 25:38 – 31:31 Act 1 Climax/Inciting Incident 31:31 – 31:50 Outro Link to Rewriting Transformers 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0EikZjzb7g&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=1&t=689s Link to Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T-0_gjoE-kw&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=3 Link to Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TkvWGhOOL64&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=4 Link to Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LHw2slNasU&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=5 Link to Rewriting Transformers 2 Part 4: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBgJHigKYXM&list=PLSAuS4rWjW_wW7XrDXLCY-8Fi787-NF9Q&index=6
Pitching A Skyrim TV Show
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Pitching A Skyrim TV Show

What would Skyrim look like if it was adapted into a TV show by Netflix? Find out in today’s pitch, welcoming channel newcomer TheDarkLord! Enjoy the show! Disclaimer: If you see a piece of artwork in this video that belongs to you or someone you know and you/they are not credited, please let me know so that I may update my credits list and fairly include everyone whose amazing work was featured in this video. Thank you! Fan Artwork by: amnis406, LordHayabusa357, Anna Lakisova, Daniele Montella, Alexey Kutyrev, Toby Fox, Samarskiy, Nuare Studio, Jonha Lobe, Wr47h, aenaluck, Entar0178, kaio89. Footage: “Writing Free Stock Video – Writing Free Stock Footage – Writing Videos – Writing No Copyright Videos” by PexBell – Free Stock Video Footage. Music by: “Revenge” by Blake Ewing, “Skyrim – The Dragonborn Comes – Epic Cover (Violin, Vocals, Erhu & Guitar) by Eliott Tordo Erhu Player, "Skyrim - The Dragonborn Comes - Cover" by Rachel Hardy, "Viking music (Epic battle music)" by Unwind Station - No Copyright Music, “Most Epic Viking & Nordic Folk Music Fella” by Danheim No Copyright Music, “Stormcloaks Battle Music: For Skyrim!” by Ares, “Dragonborn” by Jeremy Soule, “Awake” by Jeremy Soule, “Seven Thousand Steps” by Jeremy Soule, “Far Horizons” by Jeremy Soule, “Sovngarde” by Jeremy Soule, “Dragonsreach” by Jeremy Soule, “The Blades Main Theme” by Inon Zur, “Combat 1” by Jeremy Soule, “Combat 2” by Jeremy Soule, “Combat 3” by Jeremy Soule, “Combat 4” by Jeremy Soule, “Combat 5” by Jeremy Soule, "No Copyright Epic Action Music" by No Copyright Music Squad, "ROYALTY FREE Action Background Music Action Music Royalty Free" by MUSIC4VIDEO, “Aeryn Fantasy Vocal Track Royalty Free Music For Videos, Games, Films & Documentaries”, “Cinematic Music - 'courage to be free'” – by Whitesand, “Epic Orchestral Cinematic Music – Awaken” by Whitesand, “Glory by Epic Journey” by Royalty Free Zone, “Heavy Load” by Jordan Rees, “Light at the End of the Tunnel” by Kerry Muzzey, “Sinister Dark Ambient Background Music” by Dark Rage, “Belting Ancient Ambient Arabic Middle Eastern Female Vocal Acapella _ Arabian & Middle Eastern Music” by Andrea Krux, “Mehrunes Dagon” by Liz Katrin, “Hope” by Lights & Motion. 0:00 – 1:11 Intro 1:11 – 6:48 Seasons & Characters 6:48 – 8:36 Episode 1/Birth of a Dovahkiin 8:36 – 9:51 Episode 2/Saved by Dragon Fire 9:51 – 11:08 Episode 3/Riverwood 11:08 – 12:23 Episode 4/Whiterun 12:23 – 13:06 Episode 5/The Dead Speak 13:06 – 15:03 Episode 6/The Dragon 15:03 – 16:46 Episode 7/Thane of Whiterun 16:46 – 18:11 Episode 8/Journey of a Thousand Steps 18:11 – 19:07 Episode 9/The Greybeards 19:07 – 20:00 Episode 10/Ustengrav 20:00 – 21:33 Episode 11/Dead Reckoning 21:33 – 22:51 Episode 12/Master of the Order 22:51 – 24:20 Episode 13/Defense of Windhelm 24:20 – 26:13 Episode 14/The Embassy 26:13 – 27:58 Episode 15/The Prophecy 27:58 – 29:03 Episode 16/End Times 29:03 – 31:09 Episode 17/Out of the Past 31:09 – 32:27 Episode 18/The Empire 32:27 – 33:40 Episode 19/March of the Dead 33:40 – 34:31 Episode 20/The Treaty 34:31 – 35:11 Episode 21/Attack on Skuldafn 35:11 – 36:13 Episode 22/The World-Eater 36:13 – 36:46 Outro
Pitching A Reign of the Supermen DCEU Film
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Pitching A Reign of the Supermen DCEU Film

Welcome to my pitch on a live-action film adaptation of the "Reign of the Supermen" comic books within the DCEU! Enjoy! :) Disclaimer: If you happen to see a piece of artwork that belongs to you or to someone else that you know, please help me out and let me know so that I may provide the proper credits in this video’s description. All rights and materials belong to their respective owners. Artwork by: Dave Rapoza, George Evangelista, Phil Cho Music by: “Ambient Deep Space Music - Tales of the future” by CO.AG Music, "No Copyright Epic Action Music" by No Copyright Music Squad, "ROYALTY FREE Action Background Music Action Music Royalty Free" by MUSIC4VIDEO, Epic Orchestral Cinematic Music - Awaken by Whitesand, “Heroic Music” by Music for Video Library, “Revenge” by Blake Ewing, "ROYALTY FREE Drum Beat for Sport & Typography Video Percussion Royalty Free Drum Music" by Music for Video Library, "Superman Rising x Flight" by Samuel Kim, “General Zod” by Hans Zimmer, “Sent Here For a Reason” by Hans Zimmer, “Terraforming” by Hans Zimmer, “What Are You Going To Do When You’re Not Saving the World?” by Hans Zimmer. Link to Rewriting Batman v Superman Part 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyID8p6A0jo Link to Rewriting Batman v Superman Part 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=btAdXrqE89Q 0:00 – 1:26 Intro 1:26 – 5:32 Background 5:32 – 8:02 Characters 8:02 – 12:01 Prologue 12:01 – 18:10 Our Protagonist – Dr. John Henry Irons 18:10 – 22:23 Our Deuteragonist – Superboy 22:23 – 28:35 Story 28:35 – 32:19 Casting 32:19 – 33:12 Soundtrack 33:12 – 33:35 Outro

The Skywalker Saga Rewrite Series

The Skywalker Saga Rewrite Series

The Skywalker Saga Rewrite Series
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Rewriting The Phantom Menace Part 1

Rewriting The Phantom Menace Part 1

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Rewriting The Phantom Menace Part 2

Rewriting The Phantom Menace Part 2

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Rewriting The Force Awakens Part 1

Rewriting The Force Awakens Part 1

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Rewriting the Force Awakens Part 2

Rewriting the Force Awakens Part 2

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Rewriting the DC Extended Universe

Rewriting the DC Extended Universe

Rewriting the DC Extended Universe
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DCEU Rewrite Series Announcement

DCEU Rewrite Series Announcement

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Rewriting Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice Part 1

Rewriting Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice Part 1

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Rewriting Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice Part 2

Rewriting Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice Part 2

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Writing Tips

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Writing Tips: What is the Action Survivor Archetype?

Writing Tips: What is the Action Survivor Archetype?

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Writing Tips: What is the Fantasy Kitchen Sink Genre?

Writing Tips: What is the Fantasy Kitchen Sink Genre?

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Writing Tips: What is the Knight in Sour Armor Archetype?

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Writing Tips: What is the Five-Man Band Archetype?

Writing Tips: What is the Five-Man Band Archetype?

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The 80's Cinematic Universe

The 80's Cinematic Universe

The 80's Cinematic Universe
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Pitching an 80's Cartoon Cinematic Universe

Pitching an 80's Cartoon Cinematic Universe

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Pitching A Live-Action He-Man Reboot

Pitching A Live-Action He-Man Reboot

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